Once upon a time, there was this beautiful girl called Marie. She was a poor girl she worked for the King and Queen of Sheffiworld.

One day she was allowed out for a whole day, she couldnt get over it, she was so excited she has never seen the beautiful sun light in a long time.

"Am i really allowed out" she said while smiling a great big smile
"Yes just dont forget the food i told you to get" the Queen said
"OK" she shouted while running

The Queen watched full of hope that she would get out of the Kingdom to live a real life
the king was so wicked towards her

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'i wounder where the stores are' she thought while looking everwhere
all of a sudden she was in a complete darkness
it seemed as though she was floating then she landed on her bum on a soft
surface

Then when she opened her eyes she saw .......................

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