Hannah Banana Blogathon

My Story 4 English Coursework please comment

2008-11-24T10:11:25+01:00

“Come on Samantha were going to be late!”

“Okay Hannah” a shadow emerged from a dark shaded room, she wore a black/red lined sleeveless top on, grey skinny jeans which hugged her waist nicely, she had elbow length hair that was a light shaded brown with added black streaks, here and there, sun kissed skin and black ballerina shoes which laced up her leg underneath her jeans. But the most fascinating thing about her was her amethyst eyes they seemed to glow whenever you make eye contact with them.

She began to walk down the stairs which was across from her bedroom, she took her time because they was only meeting Justin she has known him since a young age after Hannah became her friend. She could easily tell that Hannah liked him, the way she looks at him while they walk around in school. It did her head in seeing her all lovey dovey like that it made her sick. What is love? She’d never felt love ever since that tragic day when her Dad died. She stopped dead in her tracks she could see out of the corner of her eye that someone was watching, she snapped her head round to come face to face with her pet; Tally the cat. Samantha took a last look at her then carried on walking down the 2 flights of stairs.

“SAMANTHA GET DOWN HERE AND STOP TAKING THE COOKIE!” Hannah screamed at the top of her lungs.

“I think you mean biscuit” She corrected her whilst walking towards her with a smirk on her tanned face.

Hannah was wearing a knee length dress which was shaded a pinky red her strawberry blonde waist length hair was tied up in a bun at the side of her head some strands of hair sticking out of the bun making it look wild. She wore on her feet black ankle boots, her sapphire eyes were decorated with blue sparkly eye shadow, black mascara which made her eye lashes look like they weren’t real black eye liner to finish with, but with lip gloss on her strawberry red lips.

“It’s not my fault that I get slag mixed up, we told Justin we’d meet him at Willow Park at 9 now (looks at watch) 9:05 were late” she stood with her hand on her hips trying to look serious.

“Oh come on stop exaggerating Hannah just because you like him” She copied her pose

Hannah quickly turned around, Samantha knew she was blushing. She’d known her for too long.

“C-come on were going to be even more late if we don’t leave now” She stuttered still not turning her head to look at her friend, Samantha grabbed her wrist ran towards the door, turned around

“MUM, IM GOING OUT!” she then slammed the door shut making sure her mum heard her right.

10 minutes later

They had been walking for 10 minutes now that was until they spotted Willow Park, they quickened their paces they didn’t want to be more late.

They finally reached the park in a matter of minutes. Hannah and Samantha stopped and put their hands on their knees trying to catch their breath. Once they finally got their breath back they started to look for the one and only Justin.

While they were looking for him, afraid he’d gone home, spotted some children and their parents, Samantha looked at them with sadness in her eyes. One of the kids dads asked who the kid loved the most was it the mum or the dad. She couldn’t stand looking at them anymore so she decided to look somewhere else.

After a while she laid down on the grass looking up at the clouds as they strolled by, she heard the kids and their parents coming closer she got up and walked away she looked at the scar that was on her wrist it was in the shape of a cat paw. Her dad had always told her that she was his special daughter he told her this all the time it make her weep inside.

“I miss you dad, mum is having a mental breakdown and left me alone to fight the world myself, you tried to save someone but instead the murders killed you instead” She whispered as she looked into a lake she had approached. When she looked down she saw something in the water, she reached down to grab the object but then a hand came out of the water and dragged her down into the green/bluey depths of the lake.

Under the water she was starved for air her lungs felt like they would explode, she remembered something important. SHE COULDN’T SWIM!

‘OMG I’M GOING TO DIE’ she thought as she was dragged deeper and deeper into the lake, darkness surrounded her vision leaving her in a black void of nothingness.

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chelsea

2008-03-17T14:43:56+01:00

chelsea is a loving careing girl but she has her turns she is EVIL and sian is aswell

SHE'S A MAN FOR CRYING OUT LOUD SHE IS A FUCKING LESBIEN SHE WANTS TO SHAG EVERYONE AND 2DAY SHE CALLED ME A SLUT AND A SLAPPER I HATE HER IM SORRY TO SAY THIS BUT I WANT TO KILL HER :-[" class="middle" border="0">:-[" class="middle" border="0">:-[" class="middle" border="0">:-[" class="middle" border="0">:-[" class="middle" border="0">:-[" class="middle" border="0">:-[" class="middle" border="0">:-[" class="middle" border="0">:-[" class="middle" border="0">:-[" class="middle" border="0">:-[" class="middle" border="0">:-[" class="middle" border="0">

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A story

2008-03-17T11:34:58+01:00

Once upon a time, there was this beautiful girl called Marie. She was a poor girl she worked for the King and Queen of Sheffiworld.

One day she was allowed out for a whole day, she couldnt get over it, she was so excited she has never seen the beautiful sun light in a long time.

"Am i really allowed out" she said while smiling a great big smile
"Yes just dont forget the food i told you to get" the Queen said
"OK" she shouted while running

The Queen watched full of hope that she would get out of the Kingdom to live a real life
the king was so wicked towards her

Marie's PDV

'i wounder where the stores are' she thought while looking everwhere
all of a sudden she was in a complete darkness
it seemed as though she was floating then she landed on her bum on a soft
surface

Then when she opened her eyes she saw .......................

I need reveiws of this story to do the next chapter tanks a lot i need about 3 reviews for this story

Hannah Banana
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hi there its THURSDAY

2008-03-13T15:39:46+01:00

hi im here talking live from CASTLE COLLEGE

Me and my best friend @@ron are in the library on the computers as you can see

@@ron:hey people im being raped

right sure you are

the thing is that

JAQUI MOORE IS GONE FOR GOOD

@@RON: n we r so happy

Joseph i looking on porn like always

that pervert

@@ron: im listening 2 gothic music

like always @@ron

Hannah Slater (Slapper)

is acting like a total BITCH

with her make up and her dirty mother licking hair

my dog wouldn't go out wiv her

she looks like a fuck ugly dog

My friend Mary's sis is in the hospital she has been very strong about it

gud for her

thats all for us now stay tuned

tanks

Hannah and @@ron

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hi there

2008-03-10T15:49:49+01:00

Hi there

i have calmed down now i feel much better

do you want to know why ?

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because u have had a bit of sian and a side of alicia and some of aarons spicy sauce

it tasted lovely

then i had some dessert

which was shanice sprinkled with hannah (what a beautiful chocolate man

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I Hate SCIENCE

2008-03-10T11:12:08+01:00

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iya

2008-03-04T20:20:35+01:00

iya people

ive jst seen an advert

that looks really gay

its 2 advertise trainers

there is thi man nd he is jumping off this building

nd into this metal that looks like a trainer

its so weird if you have seen any advert tht looks weird

tell me !!

Please Tanks People

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HI THERE IS TUESDAY

2008-03-04T13:21:52+01:00

2day i had art for three hours

it was so boring :@

i hate it Nicolle does it 2

we made fun o Ms Groom (our art teacher)

We say shes pregnant because she has a bump

Or we tink she has put on weight

One of the other teachers from next door came in cryin

Wat ever

WE SAY

LOL

Hannah Banana
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School

2008-03-03T15:39:26+01:00

I find school very boring the teachers are so boring they never let us do anything.

At lunch they can't even let you go out of school they say

"Have you got a pass"

I think its stupid if your school is boring like mine e.mail me or send me a comment

Tanks

Hannah Banana

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Introduction To Hannah (ME)

2008-03-03T14:49:18+01:00

Hi im Hannah,

I like to go for walks on a sunday and love horses iv'e never gone horse riding but i just don't know why i love them.

My life is great i have lots of friends like Nicolle shes an angel

And Alicia shes really great she makes me laugh every time i see her.

We are goin to London soon, with our school it cost us all £120 we are going to see WICKED and we are going to stay in a swanky hotel (thats what our school thinks)
its the premier inn its so crap.

Last year we went and we fought over who should sleep in the big bed i won of course

Emma stayed out all night with Rosie she came back at 6:30am in the morning we ignored her for about an hour Alicia got so pissed off she got up stomped to the door and opened it then stomped back to bed.

But couldn't get back to sleep oh my god.

I got up at about 7:00am my hair was such a mess when i looked in the mirror the mirror nearly cracked!!!!!!

Thats it for now

Hannah Banana xxxxxx

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